Have you learned about dangling participles? Do you know that you should avoid them?
In this lesson, you'll learn about those crazy little guys and why you should avoid them.
Let's not get ahead of ourselves here. You need to learn about participles first.
Participles are a type of verbal.
Let's check out some examples of participles, shall we?
Psst! That thing is a sentence diagram. Sentence diagrams show us how words are related. From the diagram, you can SEE that filtered is modifying water.
Filtered is a participle. It is formed from the verb filter, and it is acting as an adjective.
It tells us more about the noun water. Which water? The filtered water.
Shooting is a participle. It is formed from the verb shoot, and it is acting as an adjective.
It tells us more about the noun star. Which star? The shooting star.
Now that you understand participles, we need to talk about participial phrases.
I know. You just want to learn about participles that dangle, but trust me here. You need to learn this stuff first. You're being such a good sport. We're almost there.
Participles can be in participial phrases. (A phrase is a group of words without a subject and a verb, acting as one part of speech.)
A participial phrase consists of a participle and its complements or modifiers. All of the words in the participial phrase come together to act as an adjective.
Shooting across the sky is a participial phrase. It contains the participle shooting and the prepositional phrase across the sky.
The whole participial phrase is acting as an adjective modifying the noun stars.
Which stars are beautiful? Stars shooting across the sky.
You remember that participles act as adjectives, right? That means that they modify nouns.
Sometimes, it can be difficult to tell which noun a participial phrase is modifying. In fact, the noun that it is intended to modify may not be stated in the sentence. That's not a good thing.
When this happens, it's called a dangling participle because it just dangles there with nothing to modify.
Sitting on the park bench is a dangling participle.
Where is the noun that sitting on the park bench modifies? It's not modifying sun or clouds. In fact, the noun that it is modifying is not even in the sentence. That poor participial phrase is just dangling there with nothing to modify. Poor thing.
To fix participles that dangle, move them so that they come right before or after the noun or pronoun that they are modifying.
Now, sitting on the park bench clearly modifies the pronoun I, so it's not dangling any longer!
When participial phrases modify a noun other than the one intended, it's called a misplaced modifier. This makes sense because it is a modifier (an adjective), and it's in the wrong place.
One great thing about them is that they are usually hilarious.
Covered in mustard and relish is a misplaced modifier.
It contains the participle covered, and it is modifying the wrong word.
As the sentence is written, covered in mustard and relish is modifying I, but that doesn't make much sense!
The sentence probably intends to say that the hot dog was covered in mustard and relish, but it says that I was covered in mustard and relish.
You can learn to diagram participial phrases with this sentence diagramming book. All the cool kids are doing it.
To fix misplaced modifiers, move them so that they come right before or after the noun or pronoun that they are modifying.
Covered in mustard and relish comes right before the pronoun I.
We want to change it so that it is closest to the noun hot dog.
Here's one way that you could fix that sentence.
Covered in mustard and relish is now a regular, old participial phrase.
It's not misplaced now because it properly modifies hot dog.
Avoid dangling participles and misplaced modifiers unless you are trying to be funny!